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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Communication in a scenario and Realize i am not the only aspect of the story.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It breaks immersion, can give players a Advantage or disadvantage in a scenario, and a good role play includes Mistakes, Misunderstandings, and learning over time That is Character growth.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Lucius
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: about 6ft, always wears dark armor with a gold mask, under the mask i have brown eyes and brown hair.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

I stop short, one hand half-raised like I might bolt.

“…I don’t know you,” I say flatly, eyes narrowing as I glance from her face to the floating candles. “So let’s not pretend this is some friendly reunion.”

I don’t sit right away. Eventually I lower myself onto the edge of the cushion, tense.

“I came into town because the road ran out and the swamp didn’t care,” I continue. “That’s it. No prophecies, no appointments.” A pause. “At least, not on my end.”

I meet her gaze, steady but wary.

“So if you’ve been ‘expecting’ me,” I add, a hint of edge in my voice, “you might want to explain why. Because from where I’m standing, you’re just a stranger in a tent full of tricks—and I don’t tell my story to strangers for free.”

 
 

 

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what we are looking for

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate, no full armour suits. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what we are looking for

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate, no full armour suits. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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