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quencraft

By quencraft

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a out of character action
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: style of a game
    Status: Denied

I was born into a magic family.  At age 5 I started my magic training.  My older brother was my trainer, man was he hard on me!  He never held his powers back when we were training.  But we had a lot of good times and laughs to.  There was the one time when he set fire to the barn, but some how this was my fault.  I had to repair the barn with my own money and labor.  After 5 years of his intense training, I had surpassed his strongest skills.  It was time for a new mentor, so I moved to the Mountains.  There I met Azul a humble wizard of unknown origin.  He was mysterious, tuff and made me work even harder.  For 8 years I trained with Azul.  I started my own journey, but decided to visit home.  When I got there a rogue pack of about 20 orcs was attacking my family.  My older brother told my mom and dad to run away and they did.  I told them to go to the Mountains and find Azul.  He will let you stay there until it's safe for you to come back home.  Me and my older brother will hold them off.  Once we get rid of the orcs, we will meet you at the mountains.  To find Azul I yelled, "he is where the sun rises on the mountains".  Soon after the fight my mom and dad moved to Spring Hills.

 

Character Name: quenten
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: a tall electric mage with blue eye; blue and black cloak
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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MickMeist

 

Your application has been placed on…

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You are not allowed to apply already knowing magic, even though its weak, he can not have it. This does not mean however that he can't want to pursue magic, he just can not have it now. Please remedy this

 

Your meta and powergaming definitons are incorrect. Please improve them, feel free to reference the pages on metagaming and power emoting you can find on the home page of our WIKI

 

Your biography could be fleshed out to be more of a biography rather than just magic training, which you can't have, and one account of a 'orcs attacked my family' cliche. Please remedy this.

 

He would not be 'weak to water' this is not Pokemon. If he has a fear of drowning perhaps, it might be best to reference why in his biography.

 

Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied. If Denial is the case, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

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Your application has been:

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Failing to make pending changes.

 

Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in 6/3 hours.

 

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