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Raven0764
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: that_dude_raven
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Players are encouraged to alter their phrasing to suggest an 'attempt' at an attack, and by allowing the opposing player to emote in response to such an attempt.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It disrupts the gaming experience by creating an uneven playing field.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Shin Ha-Ri
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Height: 6ft
Skin: Faint silvery or Porcelain tone
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Blue
Ears: Short and pointed
Fem physique but is a guy
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—” Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

(The High Elf hesitates at the tent’s threshold, the swamp’s humidity clinging to their fine cloak. With a quiet sigh, they step inside, the candlelight painting silver along their pale hair.)
 

“You’ve been expecting me?” I echo, voice calm yet edged with curiosity. I sit, movements poised, every gesture deliberate.
 

“My story is a short one, though it stretches across many miles.”
I meet the hag’s eyes, the faintest glimmer of weariness behind my composed exterior.


“I was once a scholar of Haelun’or — a keeper of lore, a seeker of perfection. But perfection has a way of devouring what it touches. When the Silver Council forbade my research into the old magics — the kind buried beneath time and shame — I left.”


A candle flares briefly between us, as if stirred by the memory.


“I’ve followed whispers since then. Whispers of power, of redemption… of answers my people chose to forget. And those whispers led me here, to your swamp.”

I pause for a moment, letting the silence settle between us. Outside, thunder rolls distantly, the sound echoing like the turning of an ancient page.


“My journey was not kind,” I continue softly. “The road here was long, and the world beyond Haelun’or is far less forgiving than its marble halls. I’ve crossed ruins where even ghosts have forgotten their names. I’ve bartered truths with creatures who no longer remember what it means to be mortal. Every step I took peeled away a little more of what I was… until only purpose remained.”


The elf’s gaze lowers briefly to their hands, faintly trembling before being clasped together once more.

“I do not seek forgiveness for the path I’ve taken,” I add. “Nor do I regret the knowledge I’ve gained. But I can feel it—something old stirs beneath this mire. The same presence that’s haunted my dreams, whispering in a tongue I’ve yet to understand.”


I lean forward slightly, voice dropping to a near whisper.

“So, wise one — if you truly expected me, then you must know: I am not here for comfort or kindness. I am here for truth.”

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been

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Due to: You cannot use generative AI to write your backstory - you may use it for ideas and grammar (preferably use an app like grammarly though), but it may not write your content. Some pointers for when you apply again:

  • Expand on your powergaming and metagaming response. Think, how does metagaming make an uneven playing field? What else is included in the definition of powergaming.
  • You will need an MC skin for your application, feel free to use or take inspiration from our skin archive. → https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

  

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our Discord, if you want to ask for any help from us!

 

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