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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using IC information OOC.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Doing something that your character wouldn't normally be able to do in emotes.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Moim BlackIron
Character Race: Cave Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 133
Physical Description: Moim has red hair that is very normal among the Cave dwarves, with a braided bread and pony tail with Iron rings weaved in them.
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Lirinya

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  • Your metagaming definition is short and sweet. I’d suggest elaborating a little, but this isn’t required.
  • Your powergaming definition is inaccurate. Instead, perhaps look up power emoting.
  • Your biography requires more references to lore. You have two map changes to work with, so there’s plenty available, especially a this age.
  • Your interesting facts need to be based around traits, and you need a strong positive, negative, and neutral. For example, stammers, fears, things like that are considered traits.

 

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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