Jump to content

Rumlar_Zelgius

Rumlar Zelgius

By Rumlar Zelgius

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: parzval#8954
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you find information out of character and use it in character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when you ignore what is realistic and act as if you are a god
    Status: Denied

*looks him up and down

"move out my way"

"i have no interest in talking to a posh snob like you. and my plans are none of your concern"

*pushes his way past the gentleman

 

Character Name: Rumlar Zelgius (AKA bloodbeard)
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: over 7ft. muscular build. long black hair and blood red beard. brown eyes. wears a red captains jacket with gold accents. ominous disposition
Screenshot of Skin:
Go to applications

User Feedback

Recommended Comments

Josef_Rippelberg

fqREFqDecurHZWEQXUVYs7OD6CoLcAGNxUYcfm-0EK_9oLSl-h39HEDG1nZ0xtFjRsAHy8R2BKEbt31mLCHOnzaC-jyQG4x2v5lGm4kjGwdJTJHXkP8lkXXA9jZRv9K7UpR7EQeb

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

- Your Physical Description states that your character is 7 feet tall which is against human lore. For more info please read https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

 

- Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!


- Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Josef_Rippelberg

NH3Orn4A050__HZ2Z0kwVhpFvNnQMccgFiMnTu1FiuDKdtN8XmyOqKo0P1WY2e22XOEVSraewTv4kQTQNXjNHBZIidRiBp9xrRK_Jdzdz6fmcNasWblymw79NLcNLyPkOiOqX9DM

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- did not make the changes in time 
 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...