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S3BYY

By S3BYY

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: S3BYY#6455
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a separation between the character you are playing and your IRL
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing something that your fantasy character could not logically do
    Status: Denied

My character never knew his parents, was a lost child who ended up working in a mine most of his teenage years, he then left the town he loved in his whole life, and went in search of new adventures.

Character Name: S3BYY
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Sunburned, black and red outfit, bandanna
Roleplay Scenario:

he would look and him and respond "little bit of everything"

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

  • Your Character’s name must be an actual name. 

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

  • Your Character’ biggest fear must include a reason as to why this is. It must be two sentences long.

 

  • What your character likes most about themselves must be two sentences long and include the reason why.

 

  • What your character dislikes about themselves must be about the character, not what the character dislikes. This must also be two sentences long with an explanation. 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 


 

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