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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: its a thing you know irl. but your character doesnt yet
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is trying to do something that your character is not capable of yet.
    Status: Denied

6 years after his grandfather died. Ashera was married with 2 kids. But Eren was always around trouble. He does everything to avoid but it was impossible.The thing he did in the past was still haunting him...

  Eren were reading book in a library. he saw a magic named "Voidal Shifting". He was a sword user so that magic was so useful for him. He wanted to learn that. He asked the worker for more info about Voidal Shifting. He learned some stuff about it. And the travel began.

Character Name: Eren Bryzeiros
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A white,long haired young man. he blue eyes. he is 6.2 and 165.35 pounds.
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to numerous issues. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please either fix it, find a new one, visit our skin archive, or put in a request for a skin in our Discord. 
  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are on the right track, but need further clarification. Please also provide examples.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario needs to be about the given prompt, needs 2 actions, 1 line of dialogue, and a total of 4 lines. 
  • Your Character Biography has several issues:
    • Your 'Newborn sister' could not exist. Being a family of elves, it takes a minimum of 10 years between elven pregnancies. 
    • Your character's grandfather also would not have been 65- elves do not age the same rate as humans. 
    • You need 2 references to our lore, which you can find here.


After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @Nilyeet#0515.

If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F). For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ )

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