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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is used to describe someones knowledge wanting to know the state of the game to decide their characters actions
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: interacting with a style of gaming system with an aim of maximising progress to get a specific goal
    Status: Denied

At a young age she had to raise herself and went deep into the snow mountains to hide from all the dangers her parents would tell her.  Not many people know about her past, or what she did in the mountains. Nix is good in combat and uses a staff as her main weapon, she has a sword as back up but she rarely uses it. She is very quiet and unsociable. Nix was raised by the wolves in the snowy mountains but as she got older she grew more distant and then left to explore the outside world.


Character Name: Nix
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Pale skin, long white hair, big baby blue eyes and a short dress
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Due to the fact that you haven't made an account on the forums yet,  which makes you unable to make any potential edits to your application as there were some missing points about it.

Please do make the following changes before you can make another application, you may re-apply as soon as possible:

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✦  Your metagame and powergaming definitions seem to be a bit mixed up with another source, please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now as your examples aren't what we're currently looking out for right now. Consider contacting on me on discord if you need further explanation.

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

 

✦ It simply wouldn't be realistic for your character to be raised up by wolves in the snowy mountains. Children in the elven culture are precious and most often another person would adopt the orphan.  

 

✦ "Can talk to wolves, Can stand the cold weather due to the many years in the snow  " Your character simply wouldn't be able to be able to talk to wolves or adapt heavily to the cold solely because she has lived in the snowy mountains for a long period of time. 

 

✦ At least one weakness should be mentioned under your interesting facts.

 

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I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions.

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