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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta gaming is forcing your emotes onto others, for example, "He stabbed her through the heart." There's no roll, and no prior agreement, so it doesn't happen.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is suddenly giving your character characteristics or knowledge that he wouldn't otherwise have.
    Status: Denied

Nathaniel was a single child, born in the snowy ice peaks. He usually went down to Norland to have a chat with the locals. One day in the tavern, when he was around 15, a Puppetry sorcerer made his whole family kill themselves in front of his eyes, and used his magic to freeze Nate in the snow. He would have died, if it were not for the passing kindness of two Orcs, who took him in and took him to their village. He lived with the Orcs for a while, and eventually left, being thankful to the Orcs. He went to the Valah, and got himself a few items. However, after he heard about the recent war between the Valah and the Orcs, he left for Haelnor. There, he made friends and enemies, until one day he snapped due to the questions forming in his mind about the sorcerer. He became convinced that Peralien knew something about them, and hit her with the blunt side of his blade. He ran, but hid in the nearby bushes. When Peralien's adopted daughter ran to tell the law enforcement, he dropped behind her and stabbed her in the shoulder. He ran after that. After being told to come back, (By looc but let's just say that he was guilty) he was captured by law enforcement, and spent his sentencing and torture laughing his head off at the elves, because he knew that they would never kill them. After they let him go, they told him that he was exiled from Haelnor, and coming back would mean death. Of course, Nathaniel returned, to say goodbye to some people. He insulted Peralien, angry at the trouble that he had caused her. After a brief conflict, Nathaniel was stabbed by Peralien in the throat, and died on the streets of Haelnor.


Character Name: [Ghost] Nathaniel Calding
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: My character has glowing white pupils, with a shadowed and dark body. He has average human height, average weight, and his attire are black clothes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

Nathaniel stares emptily at the stranger. "Is this Haelnor? I have to make it back. I have to find my brother."

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

→  Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect, if you could fix this it would be amazing!

→  Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect, if you could fix this it would be wonderful!

Your Character Biography does not follow our expectations, you must apply with a living character and start your Roleplay story from there!

Your Skin and Physical Description does not match your character’s race. You selected a Human but you have applied as a ghost! Please see this corrected. 

Your Character Description needs to match the new skin you amend with!

 

Your  Character drive must not follow the lines of a ghost, but rather a living person! Please see this corrected. 

Your  Character fear must follow the logistic of a living individuals fears. 

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short and missing some things. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

Your Skin is not up to LotC standards

Take a look at our skin archive for free to use skins!  https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord Rae#3015 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Pag

→  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX   

 

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