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SergioSC

By SergioSC

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: My character does not know anything about what happens outside of the roleplay
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Impossible things that never can happen
    Status: Denied

I was born in 1553 in the middle of a jungle on a beautiful island, everything was fine until all the inhabitants of the island began to behave in a strange way with my family and mainly with me, I did not know what was happening, but suddenly by the At night, my parents woke me up and shot me that we had to leave that place, that I did not know what was happening, that he heard them, we left the house by a secret passage from behind the fireplace until he arrived at the port, from the port we take a boat and enter the sea. Unfortunately, that was a terrible storm, a storm that was not like the others, suddenly there was a lightning near the boat that made us fall from the boat and due to electricity is unconscious, from that moment I never heard from my parents. When I opened my eyes I was safe in a very big bed. Suddenly, the door opened and a big gorilla appeared who seemed to want to eat me but started asking me questions without problem. What an angry face and what did you say you wanted it to be yours , who said yes After he told me everything, I started crying and decided to let him show me his magic and all his skills in battle.
 

Character Name: Oigres Gaarras
Character Race: KHARAJYR
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: I measure 6 feet, I have a huge claws, my eyes are orange and the color of my coat is golden with white hoops.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Dromui

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Upon review, your application has been placed onto Pending. You have up to 24 hours to make the necessary edits you'll find below in order to be accepted. If you need any assistance, don't be afraid to ask a member of the Application Team for help.

  • Your definitions are both lacking. Please add a bit more information that properly defines them.
  • Your backstory requires at least one reference to currently accepted LotC lore. If you want, you can just edit "giant gorilla" to Hou Zi, and you're in there.
  • Your character cannot start knowing any sort of magic.

I recommend you join the LotC New Player Discord, as you can find help there as well.

 

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Dromui

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As you have failed to make the necessary edits to the application in the allotted time, you've been Denied. You can reapply at your leisure, just make sure to make those edits.

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