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Kasuras

By Kasuras

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: Sethhands2424#6214
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The use of knowledge to outside that of appropriate roleplay standards
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Example spawn killing
    Status: Denied

Theodoric Stems from a proud but brutal tribe of mountain dweller. raised in the far north atop the long jagged peaks of its mountains. He was groomed to be a unrelenting blood lusted monster. Yet in an odd contrast to his environment Theodoric had a tenderness to him. And had often pondered if the life of a mountain man was something he'd want to die by. Seeking to resolve his conflicted nature he journey's south in hopes of discovering a new way of life. 

Character Name: Theodoric
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: 5,7 height Skinny pale adult man brown, eyes, rugged cloak with cloth wrappings. For foot and hand wear.
Roleplay Scenario:

Opportunity friend I have sailed Nye to the edge of the world. Away from my kin and their ways in pursuit of a chance for something new. Maybe you can help me find out what that is.

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Gnomeh#8321]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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