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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is about do unrealistic things, for exemple when anyone is under the water ( For except for water criatures) you can't talk, and if you are under water and are starting taking damage you cannot use a door to make a air zone and another exemple is do a MLG to survive to a fall damage.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you are on a RPG, another player can tell you a informtion about a npc or a player than you never know on the table, this make you experience bad, because if you wanna to now the things by metagaming you shouldn't be playing roleplay exemple "I'm a bandit and off the game e tell to my friend to I stolen itens stoled from a man, this man never listen my name, him dont see my face, but my friend go to him off the game and say anything about me, my name, my home and anything else, and this is okay, buf if this man come on the game and use this informations, the game will become bad, because this broken te experience and broken te full immersio of the game.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Kall'an Tavoura
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 34
Physical Description: A man with 186cm(6'1") of height he have a big mustache and a bald head than make him a classic Uncle, he uses classic tavern owner outfits.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


    The man sit and look at she with a big smile and say — "Hello my name is Kall"an Tavoura, but you my friend can call me Kall, well my story start when a was a little boy... I Born you a classic simple family, no wars, no starving and anything else, when I become a man with my 13 years, my dad touch in my head and say to be prepared for my iniciation on the family things, well I can say its bad, but they cut my hair and say to my starting picking the wheat for the beers, they never give a chance to make my own beer since I was 17, when my life really started, on the table I start serving my beers to the sad people to come to the Holel's tabern, my dad told to my than holel is the fundador of us tabern and the start he tabern after him aposetation of hero life, — "Can  you imagine? I with a big armor killing all criatures to I found? Hahaha Pretty fun", well my life broken on my 30 birthday party, my father Bohma die on the night, when he sleep, and I cannot just progress, my dad is my life and I become alone, but one day a man come, he is A hero, the biggest hero I've seen, he told about him history the monsters, the friends, the enemies, everthing, and, and this make my happy, I...Im not strong, I know this, but I dont need to be strong to listen good stories and now Im here because I wanna this, I wanna listen the history of the legends, of the kings and off course, give them a good beer.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Your application is rife with spelling errors and mistakes! On LotC we have to hold high standards as we're a text based system and I found myself stumbling over your sentences with words missing, words not properly used or incorrect spelling of the words! Please go over your application and try to amend this.

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • Did not fix spelling errors.



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

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