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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: nightdeprived
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: respecting consequences, avoid to think i succeed everytime and only controlling my character and not forcing things
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it causes unfair advantages and ruins suprises also it takes away all the fun of roleplay
    Status: Denied

Character Name: syncor zuged
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: dark gray or black skin, white or very light hair, sharp features, and pointed ears, 5'5" to 6'0" tall, with a slim build and light weight
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


I step into  the tent, the damp, musty air clinging to my cloak. I lower myself onto the cushion, keeping my hands in my lap, and let my eyes meet hers. You were expecting me, i say softly. Then you must know why I'm here. I pause, studying her. I'm looking for someone. They went missing near this town. I was told you might have answers.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! 

Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

  • Your powergaming & metagaming answers are on the right track, but not quite there! Try expanding your answers, and give a definition of both.
  • Your backstory has a good start. Try expanding upon it a little, to make it at least 6 sentences long. Also, remember to make your emotes from the 3rd perspective. For example, "Frymark sipped pepsi." He though it was very good and was happy.

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, you will be denied.
When you are finished, please message me on Discord @Frymark to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Your powergaming & metagaming answers are on the right track, but not quite there! Try expanding your answers, and give a definition of both.
  • Your backstory has a good start. Try expanding upon it a little, to make it at least 6 sentences long. Also, remember to make your emotes from the 3rd perspective. For example, "Frymark sipped pepsi." He though it was very good and was happy.

My discord is @Frymark if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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