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SimpleDivvel
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: e.divvel
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Do not do anything unrealistic and allow other people to understand what you are doing.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It ruins the immersion and makes the roleplay less enjoyable
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Ozul Charri
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Around 6ft, 200 lbs. has a scar on the back of his neck and along the inside os his forearm. wears dark armour with a black cloak and a white mask
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

I was born in a small town on the west coast of the continent. I was raised by a loving mother and father. My father was a soldier and my mother an apothocary assistant. At the age of 14, my father was drafted to fight in a war for our lord. We never saw him again. at age 17, I decided to leave my hometown to explore the continent. My mother was also keen on the idea and gave me some starting funds. I travelled east, going from town to town. within a few weeks, I realised my meager funds would not be nearly enough. I had to work. I took whatever work I could. due to my parents, I had some knowledge of herbs and some basic skills with a sword. It was during these jobs that I avoided death and obtained my scars. Since I had to take whatever job I could, I would often take dirty jobs. This more often than not involved killing someone, and because of that, I chose to wear a mask so no one could see my face. That's how it was. I would go to a town, do some jobs and save money, then move to the next town. I did this for around 5 years. Then I heard a rumour about someone asking for me by name. I was curious, so I decided to find out who it was. And that brought me here, to you.

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

  • Please add action and dialogue
  • Use 3rd person in your backstory

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Annabanana1014! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @annabanana1014

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please add action and dialogue
  • Use 3rd person in your backstory

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Annabanana1014! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @annabanana1014

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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