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SinOfHope
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Out of character knowladge in roleplay
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: demand an action that the other person cant make a decision
    Status: Denied

Aina lost her memory when she was 10 years old. She wondered around in the world like a soul for 3 years. When she was 13 years old a hunter found her in the forest and took her in. She grew up with the hunter she saw the hunter as a dad.   When she was 18 years old the hunter died. She kept wearing the hair clip he gave her. She never found out why the hunter died. Now she lives in the city of snow elfs called fenn.

 


Character Name: Aina
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: A snow elf stands at 1 meter 70 cm. Her name would be Aina. She'd have long white hair and Gray emotionless eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been:

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For the following reasons:

You have plagiarized your definitions from user SinOfKarma, further plagiarism will result in more automatic denials, please write them in your own words.

 

 

The other things that need changed are:

Your bio is too short, it should be a solid paragraph detailing the life of your character.

You need to have a weakness in your three interesting facts.

 

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in when you like.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

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