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Declanswift

By Declanswift

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: So im not the best reader but I think it means like using info you get out of game in game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing actitions that are unfrair or over powered.
    Status: Denied

Grew up in a poor house hold. in the holy orodian empire. His mom loved him very much but she was always working so it was hard to get attached to her. His dad died in a hunting accident when he was only 6. He had dyslexia so he struggled in school. when he was 8 he got taught how to use a bow and was very good at it. But when he was 13 a tragity struck, while out at the market his mom died of a hard attack he had nothing so He joined the army and faught in the war of two emporers as a archer. after he lived in the woods. 

Character Name: Declan Swift
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Strong like 5*9 brown eyed a bit skinny black hair
Roleplay Scenario:

I am here for adventure, and to see things I've never seen before! 

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character Biography states that your parents were killed by orcs, which is a common character trope. Please be sure to amend this!

  • Keep in mind that your character's name will show up above your head in-game once you are accepted, so please limit the character name field to only your character's name without any additional parentheses/commas.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Please be sure to respond directly to the Roleplay Scenario prompt given!

  • Please explain what made your character develop their fear in your Character Fear Response.

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message sarahbarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at sarahbarah#0007

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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sarahbarah

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥



 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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