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Declanswift
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: So im not the best reader but I think it means like using info you get out of game in game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Doing actitions that are unfrair or over powered.
    Status: Denied

Declan says ïm here for some adventure and to meet new people!" the man says the best way to meet some poeple is at that pub. " Thanks mate" Declan says with a grin and he starts walking there. 


Character Name: Declan Swift
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Strong like 5*9 brown eyed a bit skinny black hair
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

    • https://app.grammarly.com/

    • Your roleplay scenario response is a bit off. It should be in third person.

    • Your character’s fear needs to be at least two sentences long and explain why they fear that, as well as tie into their personality traits/quirks.

    • Your character’s aspirations must be at least two sentences and tie into their bio!

    • Your skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

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Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ AudTheOdd#1560]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message AudryTheOddity to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you check out the application guide;

 New Player Application Guide - New Player - The Lord Of The Craft 

As well as read over the wiki! WIKI

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