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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: erykol25_
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I am trying not to break character and after the action ends, I am reporting it to support
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupt roleplaying by talking for example on discord channel when meanwhile the peopole trying to roleplay. I think it destroing a gameplay and fun of playing.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Martin
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: My character is a slim, tall 6'4", He weight about 72kg so it its little skinny. He have short hair, black eyes and have poor and loose outfits.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just woken up in some filthy tent, in a dark town. Looking around, her eyes encounter huts and cabins. The smell of rotten wood and wet moss fills her senses. She bends down and enters the worn-out tent that stood next to the one she woke up in, lit by a row of candles suspended in the air. From the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head. "What brings you to this dingy town?" she begins, then pauses to study your face, gesturing to a cushion for her to sit on. "Tell me your story."


((How do you respond?))

Example: "I dont remeber too much..." - Martin was very confused where He is and where He was. - "I am sorry, whats your name?" 
    The old woman in tent is thinking for a while and answer - Its not very important right now, tell me about your story right now and I will try to help you. - after this sentences she smile a little, trying to calm down a boy.
    Martin was still in shock, but He is trying to remember what he was doing last time. - I was riding on a rocky road with my horse thats name is Romet, then I heard a little loud crack under wheel in my cart, so i wanted to see if there is eveything fine. I am not gonna to fool you, I was little drunk beacouse earlier I meet a funny guy on the road to next village. This guy wanted to look what I have in my ofert, beacouse I am a trader that going from city to city trying to live with a money that I am mading of trading. It not very easy but that type of life is kinda... - Martin thinks for a while with a little sentimental smile - Intresting, but returning to history. When I was showing this guy what I had on my cart he seemed a little suspicious, He was looking like hobo but he had something in his eyes that made me feel... 
   The old woman with a interst interupts a Martin - Scared?
       Martin thinks for a while trying to remind how this guy was smiling to him then he is saying - Scared, I think the better word is afraid. But after I showed him my loot He offer me a drink for and sayed "This make you have a better travel". I am not that stupid to drink from others bottles when they offers it, but He was drinking it so i tought so its not poisoned and I knew that this road travel is not going to be fast so I wanted to make it funny a little. - Martin stay up from a chair to take a breath and walk around to remeber more - So returning to the last thing i remember, when I get off the horse, I walked up behind the cart, then I saw a pieces of black bottle that was crushed on the way behind my cart...  - Martin ends he's monologe and try to remind more things. Then when he try to comb hair, He feel a fabric for dressing wounds what was put on by the old women. And then He remind - and after i seen this bottle, I felt pain on the back of my head. - Martin ended hes history then an old women started to saying.
  -Okey, I think, I know what happend to you. This "funny guy" after he drink with you, He specially drop this bottle on your cart. And when the bottle drops on the road, You was confused what was that sound, he or his supports could easliy eliminate you, after you tryed to recognize what happend. I think that you are very lucky that you are alive.
 Martin now looks a little sad but He is a optimistic type of guy that dont worry to much so its not visable for his face - But wait... How I Am here?
  The old woman with a smile on her face answer the question - You ran around my tent singing some sea songs and screaming for help.
 -Oh... thanks and sorry, I did not remember that
 -No problem, but... what are you going to do now? 
 -Me? I will try to return to my old life of a trader. But I must revenge or although meet this guy that gave me a drink.

    After this words Martin he said "Goodbye" and leaved the tent with feeling that He will going to have very intresting future. First what he want to do is trying to get some type of transport like for exemple new horse, beacouse Romet is propably not alive or it is in not very good hands.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

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Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

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