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TeawithFrisket
  • Rules: No
    Referral: Other
    Discord: SlightGaming#6545
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: saying something that hasn't been known yet by your character or your group
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: legit overpowerment
    Status: Denied

*As she looks at the ship leaving dock she grips her bag and turns to the man* "well sir im here for what ever the world has for me, im her to make a life of my own and or look for one at best. its not everyday i sail on a ship , although to be honest with you i dont have sea legs and i get easily sick from just seeing water and only water with no land in sight. But who knows what this new world and day has in store for me, My Friend always said, 'to find an answer one must as a question' and that question is what do you have for me world!" *as her book drops and she immediately grabs it*

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Character Name: Frisket Monet
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Short, brunett hair, white, black eyes
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly! (Skin has brown eyes, not black)

  • I recommend editing your Character's Fear of death, since death is a very common fear among individuals! Their fears should add to their personality and be somewhat unique to them. Please also elaborate on why these fears developed!

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message teawithsarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at teawithsarah#0808

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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