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Sneaky007
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Jacky#8674
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta-Gaming can be basically defined as the use of out-of-character informations in your in-game character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power-Gaming can be defined as feeling invincible or god-like, without being afraid or feeling in danger.
    Status: Denied

 

 

James Hellwound was born in 1753 into a restricted Hansentian company. This company was made of refugees. In fact, they all escaped after the huge defeat of the Battle of Upper Rodenburg. They are all descendants of the Empire of Renatus, where they lived. His father was Harold Hellwound and his mother was Jordane Havenbeam. Harold was a proud warrior, who was repeatedly given responsibilities in patrolling the mountains where they live. Jordane spent most of her time in reading and studying medicine, his greatest passions.

In this context James acquired the first cultural skills, staying at home with his mother.

 

Once he reached the age of 11, James began to approach the world of combat and the chivalric code of honor. He became also passionated about the history of his race and his ancestors. An incredible sense of pride for his origins and his people will lead him to despise many other races he will meet during his life. With the approach to hand-to-hand fighting, he started to study the history of his race and his ancestors. Inspired by the ideals of several of his ancestors of the Teutonic Order, he shapes his fighting style on the Teutonic Soldiers’ one.

 

Once he reachead the age of 16, James went against many of the most important people of his community. All these discussions where about ethical questions regarding the loss of the values of the ancients from whom they come. His sense of honor for his ancestors leads him not to take a step back, so that, in order to avoid internal conflicts, he was expelled from the community. 

 

Desolate that he can no longer meet his parents, that he can no longer serve his people, he begins a journey to discover as much as possible of the surrounding world. The urgent need to find out informations about the surrounding world increases. He had to know what was hidden beyond the mountains of the North in which his community lived. He had to know more about the surrounding realms, like the Holy Orenian Empire.

At this moment he started his journey, the journey that will lead him to find himself and decide what to do with his future.


Character Name: James Hellwound
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: James has bright blond hair and fair skin. Her piercing green and shiny eyes are unique. His build is tall and not too robust. 6 '' ft, 170 lb.
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

James, almost frustrated by the loss of time that is supposed to be that conversation, replies without hesitation: "Thank you for the welcome, Gentleman, but the reason I'm in this city is not your business. I wish you a good day" . After this answer, he continued his walk to the market, hoping not to waste any more time in unwanted conversations.

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Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted.  These are:

  • In your Character Biography, you mention the Teutonic Soldiers and the Teutonic Order, which are both very old and, as to my knowledge, do not exist anymore. Please alter this when making revisions. Seeing as this was one of the lore references you used, please put in another one to keep up the requirement of two. Reference our Wiki if you need help.
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please fix it or find a new one by visiting our Skin Archive
    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home


When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.

If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).

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Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted.  These are:

  • In your Character Biography, you mention the Battle of Upper Rodenburg. This lore reference doesn’t really match up with your character on a timeline.
  • Your Skin, while altered, is still not up to LotC standards. The outfit issue was resolved this time around, but the hair shading is still unacceptable. We try to avoid accepting skins that use excessive noise shading, which is what this one has. If you need assistance changing it, feel free to copy a head from our Skin Archive or send a message in our #new-player-skin-requests channel. 
    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home


When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.

If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).

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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to failing to make the proper revisions in time. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

 

  • Everything in the above pending comment.
     


After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.

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