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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By rephrasing or using wordplay to alter what your trying to say.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Gives the person advantages without figuring them out in a normal roleplay setting.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Egor
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 200Lbs 6ft tall with short black hair and blue eyes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

 

Egor ducks beneath the sagging flap of the tent, rain still dripping from the brim of his hat. His boots squelch in the damp earth as he steps inside, casting a wary glance at the floating candles. They hum faintly, like insects held mid-buzz.

The hag’s words stop him cold.

“Ah... it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit. Tell me your story.”

He narrows his eyes but lowers himself onto the cushion anyway. It’s damp. Of course it is.

“I wasn’t supposed to be here,” Egor mutters, voice low and rough. “I was on the north trade road, heading to Merrow’s Bridge. Horse threw a shoe just past the willows, so I took a side path—wanted to cut through the woods to reach the blacksmith in Driftwick.”

He pauses, as if realizing something mid-thought. “Except I never found Driftwick.”

He scratches the scruff of his jaw, mud caked to the back of his hand.

“I followed a trail that wasn’t there before. Marked with these strange, carved stones—looked like teeth, almost. Sky turned this strange color. Not dark, not light, just... stuck. Then the air got thick, and the smell hit me. Wet rot. Moss. The kind of stink that’s been here long before people came poking around.”

His gaze flickers to the hag’s eyes, just for a second.

“Then I saw the town. Not on any map I’ve ever seen. And now you’re here. Telling me you’ve been expecting me.”

He shifts uncomfortably. The cushion squelches again.

“I didn’t come here on purpose. Something led me. So, tell me—why me? And what the hell is this place?”

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is not quite what we are looking for

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s description you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is not quite what we are looking for

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s description you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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