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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming comes forth in a lot of ways, but in short, it is quite simply using knowledge that your character shouldn't know IC. This could be using Discord to coordinate with your friends.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming: The act of making your character have extravagant unrealistic powers and forcing emotes onto other player during roleplay
    Status: Denied

Colyn Dyrmoore was raised in Senntisten, the capital of the Kingdom of Marna. As he was an only child living in the tavern his parents owned. He’d spend his days listening to tales from the many traveling adventurers. However as the years passed and Colyn grew older, his laziness grew more prominent and interfered with his daily life. He started to partake more in drinking and his friends became less loyal and more unreliable. The only thing that stayed the same was that he continued to listen to the tales of the other patrons with longing in his gaze. His mother came to him time and time again to complain about his drinking. His ‘friends’ would sometimes take advantage of his inebriated state to win themselves free ale. His parents didn’t trust him, he had no real friends left, and he was miserable in his family home. Pride was what kept him from finding fault in himself. There was no reason to stay. Colyn's parents would find his room cleaned out with only an empty rum bottle left on the stone floor. He would find his own happiness.

Character Name: Colyn Dyrmoore
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 31
Physical Description: Colyn is a fair-skinned, but scrawny, still moderately young man, with shaggy brown hair and welcoming green eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Your application has been:

 

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For the following reasons:

A) It seems that this section of your biography was plagiarized. Plagiarism results in immediate denial. However, it seems like you may not be aware you are plagiarizing. If you would like help please feel free to PM me and I'll help you through rewriting your biography to avoid plagiarism!

The plagarized section is as follows: "He started to partake more in drinking and his friends became less loyal and more unreliable. The only thing that stayed the same was that he continued to listen to the tales of the other patrons with longing in his gaze. His mother came to him time and time again to complain about his drinking."
 

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