Jump to content

SpadeoSpadestar

RedRidingMercenary

By RedRidingMercenary

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Little Red Riding Hood #9977
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Forgetting what context means and entails in roleplay. What you know and what your character knows are completely different things, which, with metagaming, results in people using out-of-context knowledge to the advantage of their character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When someone forces their own conclusion upon an action initiated in rp, or that doesn't line up with their character's capabilities.
    Status: Denied

“As much as I think our definitions of “lovely” differ, it’s no lie that this place seems full of rich snobs and potential clients. Now leave me alone unless you’re looking for work.” Red sneers and shrugs off the gentleman, instead focusing her attention on the various axes and blades on display at the bazaar.
Mulling over the man’s words, she turns back to him and adds dryly: “I guess you could say, I’m on a quest to slay an old friend. But for that, I’m gonna need a bigger blade.”
With that, the mercenary leaves him alone.

high and mighty.jpg

Character Name: Scarlet Crim
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: A highlander with dirty, bloodstained clothes and bandages, with a BMI of 20.1 and a height of 6'2''. A yellow eye glows menacingly.
Screenshot of Skin:
Go to applications

User Feedback

Recommended Comments

  • Realm Leader
moosehunter123
  • Realm Leader

n4uBC4ZfaGlVSAm3umt9Yuzz-KHu5t46THggeQ3ChQawGQwo6EH8mcUXyQdHfERXWRb1lOBq9bEZXMbstTzkLJ9flxlar8gNcOsv2zhiKvl5l_FY0BWyKKGrFRN_aoTWum4QaeN8

 

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Power-Gaming

  • Physical description

  • Roleplay Scenario

    • Failed to be at least four sentences long please expand upon your characters actions and thoughts.

  • Bio

    • First off if you are a descendant of Krug you would have to be a orc. This simply doesn't make sense in your bio. Please refer to the Human wiki as I have linked above and polish up on the server lore.

    • Also I fail to understand why a wolf would devour its prey whole... Normally a wolf would rip it to shred and pull it apart piece by piece. Please also change this.

    • What did your parents do, are they low street merchants or how was your character raised? This Bio is very combat based and doesn't really show me much of the character up bringing at all and somewhat follows the lines of Oh my parents are dead and got killed by bandits, please make this unique and maybe a bit more normal like a normal kid growing up in the Empire of Oren.

  • Skin

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @Cad518#8811, and I recommend you join the LOTC Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...