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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: spixyhomke
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By taking the harder/longer choices that dont break the rule of powergaming rather then taking the short easy choices that break the rule
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Lets say a person got a message in discord from another person about a location or someone who is somewhere but they should have found out in the roleplay and the person gained advantage with that.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Hamis
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: I will make race application for Olog ( i dont know how ologs weigh and how tall they usually are) red eyes, black skin and clothes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
i will try to write how a olog would 
Example: I travel far swim very much lost brother and sisters many of them i come here looking for man for the man who destroyed everything for me i dont care what i do to find him i will find him i will not stop untill sisters and brothers sleep well when that man is gone.

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question.

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  Please note that you cannot apply to be whitelisted as an olog; adjust your application accordingly.

- Your skin file is not uploaded correctly, Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question.

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  Please note that you cannot apply to be whitelisted as an olog; adjust your application accordingly.

- Your skin file is not uploaded correctly, Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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