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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: meta gaming example:my player attacks a monster, and then i hit it for ac of 35 then i miss it then when they hit an ac of 37, there going to use metagame knowlegde to reason out ac of the creature.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: powergaming is a style of interacting with games or game systems. particularly video games. Role-playing games. having the aim the maxims players progress to one specific goal.
    Status: Denied

There is where it start, tis a story about a young boy called Keler only 18 had his family and village raided by orcs. He was the only one to survive and swore revenge on his mother, father and brother. He stumbled upon a village at the age of 15 young and scare he asked for help and the village people. The king was the one to take him in and he said to his new father that some orcs killed his mother and father. The king said he will help him get his revenge by training him to be big and strong. (3 years into the future)  he has became big and strong enough to go after the orcs that killed his mother and father. He finally says to the king lets get an army and get those orcs So he ventures to the orcs main base at mount killalot. where the main orc leader was there. Keller and the army charge in and kill every single one leaving none alive and then his vengeance has been fulfilled.  The he says to the king i need to go back to see if there is any highlanders back where im from. (He ventures to the highlands) then finds ones woman and she look distort and he goes over and helps her and they go back to the kings castle. She thanks him and and then few years later they have kids then the king hands over the crown to his only son Keler.

Character Name: Keler
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: in the distance i can see him keler hes standing tall and proud with his battle axe back from war, long dark hair hanging down. nice blue eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Andustar

Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

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- Your biography doesn’t reference a single piece of lore relating to the server. To amend this, please refer to the Wiki or forums for sufficient lore and information. Your character’s background is also rather cliché and unimaginative - you cannot establish your character as any kind of region leader. You’ve also referenced a ruler who never existed and provided no name for the region in which he came from. 

 

- Both your definitions for metagaming and powergaming are wrong. To amend this, please refer to the following sources: Wiki-Metagaming and Wiki-Powergaming.

 

- Your character’s skin doesn’t match the appearance of a highlander. Please change this and provide a skin appropriate for the race. If you experience any difficult with this, please refer to the Tailor’s Guild for assistance, or otherwise browse the Skin Archive.

 

- One of your interesting facts is powergaming. I quote, “No matter what enemy you put in front of him he will take them out no matter what.” Please remove this and replace it with something reasonable.

 

 

You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

 

For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

 

You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

 

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Andustar

This Application has since been:

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Reasons for verdict:

- Your biography didn’t reference a single piece of lore relating to the server. Your character’s background was also rather cliché and unimaginative - you cannot establish your character as any kind of region leader. You also referenced a ruler who never existed and provided no name for the region in which this character came from.

 

- Both your definitions for metagaming and powergaming were wrong.

 

- Your character’s skin didn’t match the appearance of a highlander. Please change this and provide a skin appropriate for the race next time.

 

- One of your interesting facts was powergaming. Please remove this and replace it with something reasonable.


Your 24 Hour deadline wasn’t met. However, you may reapply immediately, provided you have done so no more than 5 times this month.

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