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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: StaticCarbon#8143
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta gaming is using information you got outside of the game in it. Like stream sniping.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Performing unrealistic feats, or pushing things on other players, and overriding story.
    Status: Denied

Durzag was born in a small village in the eastern savannas of Arcas. He had a normal upbringing. When he was 12 he started to have a fascination with how things worked and how they where made, because of this he naturally felt drawn to the Greater Spirit Trokorl in which he felt a similarity to. When he was 18 he could not stand living in his village where knowledge was is short supply, so he decided to adventure out into the world to find more knowledge and like minded orcs!  

Character Name: Durzag
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Durzag is 5'9" tall, weights 170 pounds, has black hair and brown eyes, with grey colored skin.
Roleplay Scenario:

 Durzag still being in awe at his surroundings, straightens his back and looks the man in the eye but relaxes immediately and says "Hello". Not wanting  to start off on the wrong foot, Durzag loosens his posture "I'm here looking for knowledge on machines, and if you know of anyone who would share such knowledge?"

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your character’s likes do not have a reason. This should be at least two sentences long and explain why they like this about themself

  • Your character’s dislikes do not have a reason. This should be at least two sentences long and explain why they dislike like this about themself

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ HypedAngel#2020]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message HypedAngel to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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