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    Referral: Youtube
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using Knowledge OOC IC.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Emoting actions your chacracter can't really do IC.
    Status: Denied

I was born in 1973, When my father "Abraham"   Was  starting to be my father, We lived together in Atlas, When i was a 7 Years old, He teach me How to use a bow, and how to shoot, We found a deer, He told me to be cold and plan first, After that, He teach me how to aim, I aimed, He told me to release the arrow, I got the deer right where i wan't. After, He gave me the small knife he had, and told me to kill the deer. I couldn't do that Because the deer was Really hurt, He toke his hand, Hold my hand, And moved the knife inside to the deer's body slowly, and I did put it deeper, the deer died and we got food. Then when we wan'ted to get back home, A giant creature showed up, My father Had a Axe, He just hit the creature's legs and we killed him. 5 Years later i was already 12 years old, I've got a job and earned cash. My father Upgraded my bow and also bought me a Long Sword. I've found a Donkey and tamed him, After that, I've been riding on the donkey and i found A small temple with medium creatures that defends a treasure, I've Started killing Them with the long sword i had, But then I lost the long sword while climbing the walls to reach the exit, My bow was still on my back, I've been riding again on the donkey, and I've returned home and showed Abraham. When  I was a 15 years old, I've bought Abraham And me a new house to live in. I didn't wan't to use a Long sword, normal one is Enough. I've showed Abraham How i trained my skills on shooting, He told me I could be a warrior, I've listened and actually joined the warriors. A day later, We've been training a lot on the skills, Every second of working was worth it. We had only a minute of rest. I was Strong, I've got much of gold coins, I've bought with them sets of cloths that I can use from the armor shop. I've been killing more and more and more creatures. One day, I get a note that my Father, Abraham, Died from a really big creature. The location was in the note to, I've reached the area and I was Scared. I've tried to killed him but it didn't help. The last thing i could Think on is My warrior Rage, I toke my sword, Climbed on a tree, Jumped off from it To the creature's head, And started stab him in the head, I've finally did it. A lot more years later I've became a Warrior, A 35 years old one. Once, Bandits attacked a man in the street, I've ran there really quick and got them dead, the man thanked me. Then the other bandits knew i did it and they found my donkey, They just killed him. I've been Attempting to find the bandits, I found one camp of one of them. I've had to aim at him with my bow, He told me where The other bandits are and then I killed him. I've got the other bandits dead, but i was Bleeding badly on my arm, I've got a doctor and he helped me. Years later I've been a 39 Years old warrior, But I've lost everything I had Because they finally did strike me again.

Character Name: Brook DarkLord
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: In the biography you'll see the times of brook in the life, And how he was a warrior. He also loves to help the community.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Leroy

I forgot to login so you'll see it as guest but it's my application actually. It's really mine.

 

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winterblessing

Your application has been:

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Unfortunately, since you created this application with a guest account, I cannot allow you the 24 hour grace period to make changes to your application. For your next time around when applying, you will have to make these changes:

 

-Please provide an example of your definitions for both powergaming and metagaming. I would also recommend going into a bit more detail with each.

-Simply stating that your character lived in Atlas is not a good enough reference to the LOTC lore. You will need to make reference to the lore at least once more. I would recommend this be through a place, or an event that has impacted your character, but the choice is ultimately up to you. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

-I would recommend changing your character's last name from 'DarkLord' to something a bit more conventional. Perhaps choose a traditional human last name?

-Currently, it is the year 1657. We have not even reached 1973 yet.

You may reapply in 6 hours. If you need any assistance making the above changes, don't hesitate to send me a message. You can also join the new player discord if you require additional assistance: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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