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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using out of game information in the role play for the changing of events.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing your actions on others with no way of countering it. I.E " i cut them in half, instantly killing them " the other person has not been given the chose to counter the attack.
    Status: Denied

Interested the Starbreaker and wishes to know more about the engineering of the steam powered ships of the stormbreakers. To use some of there knowledge to power great mining machines or hammers for a greater production of materials. The knowledge could also be used to power other machines of war should there be another war. He wishes to improve his skill as a smith and hold the tredishons of his kin that has brought them much respect. 


Character Name: Torhan Vavilov
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Dark haired dwarf and a twin platted beard. 4 foot 2, large forearms, constant smell of burnt.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦  please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now.

 

 

 

✦ At least one weakness should be mentioned under your interesting facts, though I'd recommend that you expand your interesting facts in full sentences.

 

✦ Your character cannot possess any magical abilities as it takes both in character time and in real time to learn properly.

 

 

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

 

 

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Your application has unfortunately been...

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Your time has expired, you may re-apply immediately.  

Please do refer to the other post above for the following changes you need to do before your application can finally be accepted.

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