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tgmastergamer

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: iandude#6589
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: meta gaming is a game where people acts and plays as a specific character(role play)
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: power gaming is a style of interacting with the games or game systems
    Status: Denied

the character was born in the town of oren and was raised by his mother. His father died during the war which he had a rough time growing up. he used to play sword fights with his friend with sticks

and dreams of becoming a knight like his father so he continues to practice and practice every single day until his feet and his hand becomes sour. when he turned 13 he went into forests and hunt and

explore many other places and started to gain experiences to become a knight and his mother was always encouraging him that he will once becomes a wonderful and succesful knight if he trains hard

enough and not greedy or cheat then he turned 15 and applied to become a knight and these days he is still waiting to become a wonderful knight his mother told him he could become one.

Character Name: ian sword
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: i would like my character to have black hair, black eyes, a bit muscular at the bodies with average height and also have average weight
Roleplay Scenario:

hi. im from a far away place called oren, i only came to this wonderful city to apply to become a knight and start a new life helping others and protecting this beautiful city.

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • Please write your Physical Description and Personality Traits/Quirks in a third-person perspective, such as: “Ian has black hair, black eyes...”

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord as well.

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LotsOfMuffins

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to your 24 hours being up, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • Please write your Physical Description and Personality Traits/Quirks in a third-person perspective, such as: “Ian has black hair, black eyes...”


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F.

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