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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using informaton that your character does not know to gain an unfair advantage in situations
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: forcing actions that are next to impossibale... *with swing of my raipier i cut you in half...* dude, dou do know i have +3 plate, right?
    Status: Denied

Ater his father, Momofuku Ando, died in the year of 2001, he took charge of his clan, Nissan. After 10 hard years of hard work and many wars he chose to leave the clan to his brother, Hirotoshi Ando. He then went on a year long voyage to the well known land called Atlas, and *At las* (ha I'm funny) he arrived. It was the 17th day of the 7th month when his feet hit the solid ground, "今日私はラーメンを作っていきます。私たちは楽しい時間を過ごすつもりです。さて、始めましょう,  (Im going to make ramen, were going to have fun, well, lets get started.) 

 

 

And what koki said that day was the truth, I am going to make some ramen, WE are going to have some fun, and... well, lets get started


Character Name: koki ando
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Koki ando is a person from a Far away land, his skin is naturally very tan and his eyes are.... you know what. he's Asian ok? he`s 5'3 and well built
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Let's begin at the top.

-The year is incorrect. You're roughly 350 years ahead of when the era is.

 

-There isnt enough lore reference.

 

Your definitions for powergaming and metagaming are acceptable.

 

The skin needs to be overhauled. That is just a basic Steven skin with a ramen bowl. It needs to match the character description.

 

I'd put more research into your character, there are oriental cultures within human rp you can go with as opposed to just appearing from Japan.

 

These are the hard points that need to be changed. Please make a forum account and reapply with that in you wish to proceed

in trying to join the Lotc Community.

 

Thank you and have a nice night/day.

 

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