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TheAnimeTimelord
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta-gaming is using knowlege outside of a role-play for EX:knowing someones ING name before your character learns it
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when I or someone else determines what happens to someones character and not giving them a chance to choose what they want to happen to them.
    Status: Denied

he is a young boy how was adopted into a mid-class family and his mother is his only parent left after his father was killed in a war. With his older sister who always incurred him to follow his dreams. he one day saw a sign for a tournament in a couple of months because of his dad being a dead knight he trained up using his old gear. during the tournament. As he went though the tournament he slowly found out he was very good with as sword and they wanted him to go to the knight academy but he didn't want to server as a knight at his age so one day he left in such for adventure. On his adventures he is trying to learn the legendary arcean magic.


Character Name: Aagneya
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 14
Physical Description: Light Brown hair,black eyes, blue hoodie,brown skin,black pants,and black showes
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hey bud and welcome to Lord of the Craft! I've taken some time to review your application and there are a few things I need for you to edit before I can make a conclusion on your application. Do not worry, you aren't being denied, you'll simply be given up to 24 hours to make any and all edits necessary that I require. These edits are as followed:

  • I need you to expand a bit on your definitions. There is a bit more to what you gave me that I'd like to see added.
  • This is a high fantasy roleplaying server. While I will not deny you for your choice in a character name, 'Flame' is not necessarily fitting of the theme. You aren't required to change it, but do consider doing so. It can always be an alias or nickname for the character if you decide to do so.
  • I would appreciate it if you'd edit up your backstory a bit. It's not so bad, but the grammar could use a bit of work to make it a bit easier to read. 
  • Also, you've failed to use some form of preexisting lore of the server within your backstory. If you could add anywhere from 1-3 references, to show you've read some lore and familiarized yourself with it, it will raise your chances of being accepted immensely.
  • Sadly, you're first character on the server cannot be a child. As such, they are required to be at least 18 years of age. 
  • For your skin/description, I wouldn't describe it as a hoodie. Make a few edits to the description so it's a bit more theme-fitting. Such as a blue "cloak" rather than a "hoodie".

You have 24 hours to make the necessary edits to the application before it is denied. If you require any help, please feel free to send me a message here on the forums, or @ me on the status update bar or on my profile directly. I'm more than willing to help and answer any questions you have. If you seek further aid, you can join the LotC New Player Discord, where we have a large number of dedicated players who seek to aid applicants in joining our community!

 

New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/X4tfun

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6 hours ago, TheAnimeTimelord said:

Ok thaks

 

Hey bud!
 

I went ahead and took another look at your application, as you've made some edits, such as the definitions and the name! Which are excellent, however I require a few more edits before I will make a final decision. Do not worry, you have the full 24 hour period I mentioned earlier to take care of it, so don't feel rushed. I still require:

  • An addition of 1-3 examples of currently accepted Lore of the server into your application.
  • Your character's age changed, as you cannot apply with a character under the age of 18.
  • I would also still work on editing up the backstory to clean it up a bit, on time of the lore additions. A bit of grammar goes a long way, my friend.

Good luck! Please, please, please don't be afraid to contact me if you need any help!

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As it has been 24 hours and the necessary edits have not been made, I sadly must deny you. You can post another application in three hours if you'd like, with the necessary edits. Once you do so, it will come under review once more. Below you will find the changes you should make with your next application to see success!

  • You backstory still requires the addition of 1-3 pieces of lore that show you've familiarized yourself with current and accepted server lore.
  • The minimum age a character can be upon applying is 18, anything younger is against the rules.
  • Clean the backstory up a bit, fix up some of the simpler grammar mistakes.

As I've said in the past, if you require any help, don't be afraid to contact me. And here is another link to the New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/WeSesV

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