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TheBearDenTavirn

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By lessening and giving everyone a chains
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: no metagaming
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Bea Of The Bearblood
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: I am Bea a 6'2 foot taal Farfolk woman I am 18 years old I have curly brown hair and red eyes I weld a axe
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Bea Of The Bearblood: "I am a wonderer Enserch of adwencher and friends"

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.

 

  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it

 

  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to
    ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

 

  • Your physical description needs to be changed so that it’s most like a “list” for your description. Ex: “6’2, farfolk, curly hair”, and so on.

 

  • Your physical description is describing what your character looks like, adding age and personality is not necessary. 

 

  • Your skin cannot have animal ears.

 

  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! Farfolk cannot have red eyes. Please refer to the Racial Hub WIKI page for more information.

 

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! If not please take a look at our skin archive!

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive
 

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! Or please take a look at our skin archive!

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

  • Please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best 

of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is peachcool If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @peachcool

you can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pinging @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to
    ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

  • Your physical description needs to be changed so that it’s most like a “list” for your description. Ex: “6’2, farfolk, curly hair”, and so on.
  • Your physical description is describing what your character looks like, adding age and personality is not necessary. 
  • Your skin cannot have animal ears.
  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! Farfolk cannot have red eyes. Please refer to the Racial Hub WIKI page for more information.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! If not please take a look at our skin archive!

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive
 

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! Or please take a look at our skin archive!

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

  • Please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best 

of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is peachcool If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @peachcool

you can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pinging @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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