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TheJiffy


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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is almost the universe of the game being different from ours
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is working to progress as the person you are portraying. Using language and actions to depict yourself and play the game
    Status: Denied

Even though his family was murdered by humans, he has hopes to become a knight and to make a name for himself through missions throughout the kingdom. He hopes to become a wealthy man with his out village and family near the castle.


Character Name: Jiffious
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: An orc who has shy'd away from his people in hopes to become a knight and make a name for himself throughout time.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello, friend! I am glad to see you've decided to try and join our community, but sadly your application has denied. There are various reasons for this and they shall be listed below. Next time around, I suggest you register for our forums, that way the next time your application is reviewed, it can be edited and commented on by you. Here are the aspects of the application you need to change in order to be accepted:

  • Your definitions are incorrect. Go ahead and reread them and update it on your next application!
  • I'll need you to not only expand on your backstory, increasing it's length in the like, but you're also required to include 1-3 references to current and accepted lore for the server. That way, you can show you've familiarized yourself with the servers story.
  • Please expand your character description as well.
  • Your interesting facts are indeed interesting, but I need you to add one fault in there as well. That way you can add a bit more depth to the character of Jiffious!

You must wait three more hours before applying, but once that time is up, please feel free to repost your application, preferably on a registered forum account! If you need any help, don't afraid to PM me on the forums or @ me in the status updates section or my profile directly. Below you'll also find a link to the LotC New Player Discord!

 

New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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