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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: the_littlest_city#1480
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using a "3rd eye" to gain knowledge suddenly and without any background
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Not giving the other player a chance to defend themselves
    Status: Denied

I never had parents, as far as I can remember. It was always just me and my brother, Philza.  My brother said that our parents died in the fire of Sanjezel, and that he, at 12, fled to The Fringe on his own wings with me in his arms. My childhood was filled with weapons lessons, survival lessons, and most importantly, flying lessons. But everything changed when I was 15. He was 18, and I was getting the upper hand in the fight. Our swords clashed, his netherite against my iron, sparks flying from the grinding. I can still hear, and see him laughing... before everything went red. When I finally snapped out of it, he was on the ground with a gash on his forearm. His eyes were filled with terror, something I would never forget. I flew up, with my sword and bag and flew away, out of The Fringe

Character Name: Niserie
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Long pink hair, scar over deep red eyes Ombre grey wings with a blck cloak covering them.
Roleplay Scenario:

I look him up and down, scanning him for weapons before answering him. " I'm just trying to find my soulmate, no society needed." He frowns. I ask his name. "(M/N), (M/N) (L/N), a pleasure to make your aquaintence Miss..." "Niserie." We begin walking down the Bazaar.

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Adunians cannot have red eyes or wings! I recommend looking over this wiki page on Adunians for more information. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Adunians

  • Please amend all parts of your Character Biography/Character Likes Response that refer to flight, as your character cannot do this.

  • The Fringe/Sanjezal are old locations on past continents that your character would not have been alive for, so I recommend updating this!

  • Please keep in mind that your character cannot have pink hair unless it is dyed.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Small side-note: Netherite swords do not exist in LotC lore!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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