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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: the_littlest_city#1480
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using a "3rd eye" to gain knowledge suddenly and without any background
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Not giving the other player a chance to defend themselves
    Status: Denied

I look him up and down, scanning him for weapons before answering him. " I'm just trying to find my soulmate, no society needed." He frowns. I ask his name. "(M/N), (M/N) (L/N), a pleasure to make your aquaintence Miss..." "Niserie." We begin walking down the Bazaar.


Character Name: Niserie
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Long pink hair, scar over deep red eyes Ombre grey wings with a blck cloak covering them.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Adunians cannot have red eyes or wings! I recommend looking over this wiki page on Adunians for more information. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Adunians

  • Please amend all parts of your Character Biography/Character Likes Response that refer to flight, as your character cannot do this.

  • The Fringe/Sanjezal are old locations on past continents that your character would not have been alive for, so I recommend updating this!

  • Please keep in mind that your character cannot have pink hair unless it is dyed.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Small side-note: Netherite swords do not exist in LotC lore!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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