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Lord Edmure The Proud
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power is only given to someone who earns it. Seeing as this is also survival based: You can't just pretend you have it. You have to earn trust and use a character that people gravitate toward.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It simply takes you out of the fantasy and disrupts the whole thing. You have to start a roleplay only with the information that is accessible to your character. So everyone who is trying to play fair are not being given the respect that should be afforded to them for following the rules.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Edmure the Proud
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Lord Edmure is a stout 6'1. He is a rugged fellow around 200 pounds. Dark Brown hair, with bright green eyes. His weak armor is a family heirloom.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"I haven't the time nor the energy for stories, crone." The hag revolts at his impoliteness. Edmure takes a moment, and breathes out a sigh from his nose. "I must reach Burgundy within a fortnight, if I could lend your hand in pointing me the way; this swamp is vast and I seem to have gotten myself lost." She stares back at him with a wide eyed smirk. Clearly Edmure will not be making it to Burgundy without giving the sly witch what she asked for. He shakes his head reluctantly and lets out a small chuckle. "If it interests you so... I was raised not a days travel south of Norland in a village called Brookhen. A small town it was, but quite proud." In his reminiscing, The Proud Knight begins to let his guard down, "In my youth, I apprenticed under my grandfather as a stone mason; a good man if there ever was one." The woman hackles for a brief moment, "trust me boy, there never was." Edmure looks to floor, and lets out a response under his breath "Perhaps you're right." He begins to gather his things, believing this had been enough story for the day. "Brookhen, Brookhen, Brookhen... I have never heard of such a place!" "And you never will." The Proud former Mason bags a pint and a loaf of bread, and opens the door. "Now point me the way." Whatever happened to the proud town of Brookhen, Sir Edmure cares not to share it.

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are a knight, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.  

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

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