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Lira Goldburge
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By making sure that everything you write would be a realistic play of events. It's also a thing of common sense to know if your character would be able to do something or not and make it sound realistic.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is basically a way of cheating the game. It gives a player and unfair advantage to a situation to better the results in their favor. When someone does metagaming it creates an environment that wouldn't be real because in real life during that period of time you wouldn't be able to see what was going to happen and prepare for it.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Lira Goldsburge
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Height: 5'3"
Weight: 135 LBS
Hair: Silver White long with a braid in the back
Eye Color: Golden Yellow
Outfit: Green dress with butterflies
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

Lira blinked, taken aback by the old hag’s words. “Expecting me?” she echoed, her voice wavering between confusion and cautious curiosity. She stepped farther into the dimly lit tent, her boots squelching softly on the damp ground. The flickering candles cast long, eerie shadows across the canvas walls, making the whole place feel like something out of a dream—or a nightmare.

She hesitated, glancing over the woman’s worn features, then sat on the cushion as instructed, her movements slow, thoughtful.

“Well, that’s an odd thing to say.” Lira chuckled nervously, brushing a strand of her light hair behind her ear. “I’m not sure who would’ve expected me. I’m not exactly the kind of person who’s easy to predict.” She shifted uncomfortably on the cushion, her fingers playing with the hem of her sleeve. "But, if you want to hear my story..."

Lira let out a deep breath, leaning back slightly as memories began to stir.

“I left home,” she began, her voice quieter now, as though the weight of her words was just beginning to settle in. “I was supposed to be... someone. Someone who fit the mold, who stayed in one place, followed the rules. But that wasn’t me. It never felt right. So, one day, I packed up and walked away, just like that. I wanted to start fresh, to find a place where I could be... more. More than just a name or a role. A place where I could choose who I am, not be dictated by what others expected me to be.”

Lira's eyes drifted over the flickering candles, their soft light reflecting the wistful longing in her gaze.

“I’ve been traveling ever since. Not really sure where I’m going, but I’ve met a few people along the way. Friends, maybe. And... well, if I’m being honest, I’ve wondered if maybe—just maybe—I might even find something more. Someone. Someone who sees me, not just the version of me I was supposed to be.”

She looked back at the old hag, her expression uncertain, but open. “I don’t know if that’s what you were expecting, but that’s my story. I’m just trying to find a place where I can finally belong. If that’s even possible.”

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

→ Hey there! A section of your application has been flagged for use of AI. Please don't use AI when doing your application, the roleplay responses purpose is to help us Staff Members determine if you know the basics of roleplaying, we don't ask for a masterpiece, but simply wish to see that you know the basics. Feel free to apply again after twenty-four hours!

→ Also just a tip for reapplying, sadly you are unable to have yellow eyes as a High Elf!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord wretchedaidan. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

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From there go ahead and log your new player’s information here, You don't need to message the denied applicant, however if you’d like to just shoot them a forum message with a bit of advice

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfVc5EqIOAUgb6sA-pKRwfjNA1Y605z_cEwoUeNNUaCzR_SDw/viewform

 

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