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Tizlyne

Tizlyne

By Tizlyne

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: i like it
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its good, could use work but everything dose :D
    Status: Denied

when Zeno was born she had a twin sister, Rosie, what was weird is that Rosie had a sun on her cheek, while Zeno had a Crescent moon her cheek. According to Wiki for high Elves 

" The other descendant races may have difficulty comprehending High Elven behavior due to the different mental time-frame their mortality imposes upon them. Thus, it is important to not only account for the cultural meaning of what a High Elf does, but also the meaning of how those actions will be felt for weeks, months, and years to come.  " Zeno was a normal elven girl and didn't have these problems till she was two, Rosie on the other hand, Didn't get it till she was five. Life was pretty normal till Zeno was Ten. she had gotten her powers but because she was so young she didn't know how to control them, Thus she was Ten. Zeno ended up hurting Rosie seriously. Rosie stayed in the healing den for Three months, And Zeno stayed in her room, even when Rosie came back telling her it wasn't her fault but it was no use. she only came out when she needed to eat or train. when this happened she still didn't talk to anyone until she was Fifteen, she had trained enough to go to knight school, as the youngest trainer  there. three years later she is now a knight, and looking for a place to call home, as she stepped of her boat, little did she know her adventure was about to start...

Character Name: Zeno
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: they wear knight clothes she has lime green eyes she 5'10 skinny and her weight is 120 pounds +she has brown hair that fades into purple
Roleplay Scenario:

oh hi there im trying to find a place where i can help those i love, say, can you help me find a place to stay i uh dont have anywhere"

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Hi friend, your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to may errors and mistakes.

You can always reapply with the right corrections!

 

Here are the mistakes you need to fix if you wish to reapply:


⚘ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability.
I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

 

⚘ Your Roleplay Definition is a little short, please add more detail.

 

⚘ Your Character Biography is using lore that is NOT from our server.

 Please add an LotC lore reference.

Please take a look at the following links to see the lore of the server:

Almaris | Races | Nations

 

⚘ Your Personality Traits/Quirks is a little short, please add more detail.

It needs to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
This can be your persona’s fears, how they act around people, how they typically feel, etc.

 

⚘ Your Character Achievement is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

Please explain why and what your character wants to achieve in greater detail.

 

⚘ Your Character Fear is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

It should also explain why your character developed this fear in greater detail.

 

⚘ Your Roleplay Scenario should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one.

It also needs at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one. The response must be in the 3rd Person.

 

⚘ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like:

Skin Archive Site

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time.

If you have any questions you can message me through the forums or message me through discord: dove#8701

Or you can ask for help in the LOTC Discord

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