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Fern The Fiend

By Fern The Fiend

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Use the words attempt or try like in DND instead of absolute actions and phrases
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Unfair and unfun
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Fern
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Muscular, tall green skinned orc woman with black hair and hazel eyes with many scars. Tusks are not immediately clear and have been shaven down. 6'5
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
 "You must be mistaken, I am no one. Just passing through."

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Wonderland_Boy

Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below.
 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
    You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
     
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.


If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @Wonderland_Boy to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Wonderland_Boy

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. This may be due, either because your 48 hour editing period has expired or because of a reason listed below. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that we notify you of.

  • Your 48 hour editing period has expired

 

My discord is @Wonderland_Boy if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! :New Player Hub

 

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