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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You know the information from some one but in RP you Don't.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You do something without RPing.
    Status: Denied

There was a little boy named Cycropolus that lived in a peaceful village near elven city of Ker'nor. He had a happy and nice family until one day. raiders came to his village and destroyed erverything and stole all he loved. for his own safety he decides to hide under the bed. After the raid ended the dark elf started searching for survivors. It was then when he saw a strange looking man walking through the ruins. the man sayed: '' Someone alive i see, do you want to know who did this''? A long conversation followed that question, setting Cycropolus on a new life path. Now he's out in the wilderness, hunting down those whose hands are drenched in the blood of his kin.

 

 

 


Character Name: Cycropolus
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Really skeptical, not always in the best mood, although when you get to know him better you'll see a spark of kindness.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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  • Your definitions of metagaming and powergaming aren’t quite there yet, please refer to our pages on the wiki to help you fix them up. [Powergaming] [Metagaming]
  • Your characters story needs to be fleshed out a little more, what was his childhood like, did he have good parents and what about that man made him change so drastically? This is so we can make sure you’ll have a good grasp on who your character is and why he might go through with the decisions he makes.
  • Your characters description should include a short physical run down of how he looks to somebody seeing him for the first time, things like height, bodytype, clothing and any extra details are perfect for this part.
  • Your interesting facts should include strengths, weaknesses and perhaps a quirk, I’d recommend trying to get down one of each. Alongside this, your facts should have a little more to them than what they have currently.

If you need any help with these changes, feel free to contact me on Discord @ ??? hex ???#4689 or talk with your referral about them, if they’d like to help otherwise I’ll be more than willing.

New Player Discord; https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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