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Trevor4057

By Trevor4057

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is using outside resources to give your character knowledge in game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming would be, forcing an emote or doing unrealistic acts.
    Status: Denied

"Thank you for the kind welcome."

"I'm just looking for work... or anything to do for that matter."

Character Name: Ver-Ked Fendrat
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: 6'3 180 pounds. blonde long hair, brown eyes. older leather attire. rough looking person.
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response should be where you display your ability to properly emote!

 

Ver-Ked would approach the baker, bag in hand. “Greetings” Ver-Ked would say carefully, eyeing the baker’s hands to ensure they didn’t reach for a weapon. “Was wondering what trading this might get me” He’d say as she handed over the brown bag to the man.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord cobbler#0001 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

→  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥

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