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undeniable47
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: if not too bad ill play along, if bad enough ill attempt to make a pause to talk it out, if not possible ill leave the person.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I think it takes away from the thrill of mystery
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Nelrith Dabel
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Nelrith is around 5 feet 2 inches tall, 154 lbs, long white hair and red eyes, and wears dresses and armor.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

I sit gracefully on the cushion and make myself comfortable, "Expecting me?" i ask in a cautious tone, "You must be working with the elders to capture me... though i sense no hostility from you" I shift my weight to the left to make easy access for the dagger on my right hip if needed, "I did not murder that witch of a queen! Why would I murder the woman I swore an oath to protect!?" I stand abruptly with intent to  As evil as she was... I am not the murderer the kingdom labels me as... I am a knightess of which whom has been forced off her path by a planned attack i was not ready for... I failed her, and thus i run...endlessly."

 

(if you couldn't tell im going for a dark elf knightess who was the queens personal guard and one night a mysterios foe took her before my eyes, while i was stunned in shock i was the only one found at the scene and ran for dear life)

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Hello there! Your Application has been set to pending. Please make the following changes and we will happily take another look. You're almost there!:

-> Please write your backstory response in Third Person. Ex. He walks into the Bar, waving hello to his friend. "Hello, I am so glad to see you!"

-> Please note character may not start with connections/backstory elements to royalty, nobility, knights, or other influential figures. Also, the Dark Elves currently do not have a kingdom of there own- they are largely a part of other human/elvish nations. If you need more clarity, please dm me!

-> Please give a more in-depth response to the Meta and Power-gaming question. Take a look here if you need more info! 

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

Please feel free to contact me on the forums, in-game (/msg Kingcaouette6666) or over Discord @therighthonlortime if you have any questions or would like any clarifications!

You have 48 hours to make the requested changes, or unfortunately, your application will be automatically denied. You can always reapply if this happens!

 

PLEASE NOTIFY ME WHEN YOU HAVE MADE YOUR CHANGES :)





 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

- Failed to make requested edits within 48 hours.
 


 

My discord is @therighhonlortime if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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