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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: play fair and use improv as you base your actions on both other players response or action and also your characters personality. avoid using things that make the other player feel forced into action.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it is also known as breaking character in a sense. no newcomer is all knowing.
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Character Name: Draedon
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: moderately fit, and well postured, green eyes, birthmark on his left shoulder, moderately worn clothing and he is 4 foot even
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

 I duck into the tent, shaking off the swamp muck from my cloak as the candles sway overhead, their flames twitching like they’re watchin me. The air smells like wet moss and old wood, kinda sour, and my boots squish with every step. “Dreadon,” I say when she asks, though my voice comes out quieter than I meant. "I ain’t been on the road long, just a halfling from the hill country with no map and less sense, lookin for somethin I can’t even name yet". Her eyes catch mine — pale and sharp like bits of broken glass — and she smiles like she already knows everything I’m about to say. “Ah, it’s you,” she says, and I swear the candles shiver at her words. I sit where she points, tryin not to look nervous, but my heart’s hammerin anyway. For the first time since I left home, it feels like maybe I’m finally about to find out why I ever started walking.

 

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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:


  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc. Please ensure you have an action in there, describe your character's body language - or have them do something.
    • It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text!
  • Your Physical Description could use a bit more detail! If you’re unsure what to add, consider including details like height, eye color, hair color and length, clothing style, and other distinctive features. These are all great starting points!
  • You are using the name of a well known media object please change it! If you need help here is a name generator. → https://donjon.bin.sh/fantasy/name/#type=com;com=human_male

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 48 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord, Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the New Player Guide here could help you!
 

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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

 


 

  • Please rewrite your scenario response without the use of AI. You may ask it for ideas, but it may not write your application for you. Continued use will result in a denial of application.

 


 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 48 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord, Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the New Player Guide here could help you!
 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire) or by /msg Evonpire in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Due to: Time's up!

 

If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

  

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our Discord, if you want to ask for any help from us!

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