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vader147

By vader147

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Giving powers to your character it shouldn't have or posses
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using powers that you can't in real life
    Status: Denied

Gimmere was at one time a normal child that lived in a rich family, but when he watched his parents killed it scarred him for life.  His father was a miner, and one day Gimmere went to see his father and saw him being stabbed by the evil wood elves that lived in one of the forrests.  When Gimmere returned home, he saw his mother had been killed by thieves breaking into his house, well, it changed him.  From thence forth Gimmere vowed to not let anyone get to his heart. A few weeks later Gimmere awoke in a strange place, where he was met by very kind people.  Gimmere trained hard and learned how to sword fight and use a bow from these same people.  He is also an assassin, trained to kill people for money.  While he still has that skill, he now has become a ranger and a good one to.  If he wants to, Gimmere can find you!

Character Name: Gimmere
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 36
Physical Description: A mysterious, dark, skilled ranger and assassin. Gimmere is 5 ft. 11 inches and has dark brown longer hair.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Welcome to our forums, your application has been set on pending for the following reasons: 

 

- Your definitions aren't quite what we're looking for. If you look to our Wiki on the left side under "Helpful Links for Newer Players" you'll find links to view our explanations for both terms. Remember though to write them in your own words.

 

- With your character bio don't forget to include server lore, expanding upon your bio with additional personal events that have shaped your character also helps but try to avoid cliches such as "orcs killed my family". 

 

- Character Description is meant more to be what we see when we look at your character. How tall is he? What's his hair like? Body shape, etc.

 

- For Interesting Facts perhaps include things like a personality trait, flaw, or special skill.

 

At the bottom of your application, near where it shows your skin, you should see an Edit button. Please make the requested changes within 24 hours. 

If you have questions or would like assistance feel free to message myself or any Application Moderator. There's also plenty of people willing to offer aid or chat in our New Player Discord.

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Sadly this application has been denied as not all the requested changes were met before the 24 hour period ran out: 

 

- Your definitions aren't quite what we're looking for. If you look to our Wiki on the left side under "Helpful Links for Newer Players" you'll find links to view our explanations for both terms. Remember though to write them in your own words.

 

- With your character bio don't forget to include server lore, expanding upon your bio with additional personal events that have shaped your character also helps but try to avoid cliches such as "orcs killed my family". 

 

- Character Description is meant more to be what we see when we look at your character. How tall is he? What's his hair like? Body shape, etc. While you did add his height and hair "A mysterious, dark, skilled ranger and assassin" isn't quite what we're looking for there as you can't actually tell those things by just glancing at someone.

 

- For Interesting Facts perhaps replace "Ranger and Assasin" with another personality trait.

 

Don't worry though! While this application has been denied you are able to post another 3 hours after my post here. 

If you have questions or would like assistance feel free to message myself or any Application Moderator. There's also plenty of people willing to offer aid or chat in our New Player Discord.

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