VaderRaider1

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

→ Please ensure you give metagaming and powergaming definitions, and include examples.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Please ensure that your actions are in third person.

→ You can’t claim to be Nobility, Royalty, or someone Famous.

→ You can’t apply as someone who's an expert/”godly” at something specific. If you want your character to be good at something then do it irply when you join the server.

→ What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should be at least two sentences. 

→ Your characters biggest fear must be at least two sentences. 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there.

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX