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VanderWharick7

By VanderWharick7

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: samuel Duarte Callegari#1909
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: bom
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: sim e
    Status: Denied

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Character Name: VanderWarwick
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: medio
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!
  • Your Physical Description must be purely physical! Don’t include any details about their personality!
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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WestCarolina


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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

See the above pending message for the required edits!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also  /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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