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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: being over powered
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: idk
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.


Character Name: Benjamin
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: white eyes brown hair short
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are on the right track, but not quite there yet. Examples are recommended to ensure we know that you understand. To check out our metagaming and powergaming rules for the server, please look at this link. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your roleplay definition is on the right track, but it could be explained further for us to know that you understand how roleplaying works.

  • You need to state if you’ve roleplayed before or not.

  • Your character biography needs to have at least one lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a location, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

  • Your character biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your personality traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your personality traits/Quirks listing is too short and not descriptive! Please make sure it is at least two sentences long and explained!

  • Your personality traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality such as being cold, blind, or hot-headed. 

  • Your character’s fear needs to be at least two sentences long and explain why they fear that, as well as tie into their personality traits/quirks.

  • Your character’s aspirations must be at least two sentences and tie into their bio!

  •  Your roleplay scenario is missing. It must follow the given prompt and have a bit of action and dialog in third person.  

  • Your skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your character cannot know how to make potions.

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ AudTheOdd#1560]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message AudryTheOddity to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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