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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I avoid powergaming by not forcing actions on other players. I let them react to what my character does
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming ruins fair roleplay because my character should only know what he learns in the game
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Radahn
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Radahn is a tall man, standing around six feet in height. He wears a black steel armor covered with faint crimson cracks that glow dimly in the dark.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: (Radahn removed his helmet, setting it gently beside him. The red glow of his eyes dimmed as he spoke in a low, steady voice.My story? It’s not one of heroes or glory only fire and loss.” 

He placed the crimson scarf on the table before her. “Stormvale burned. My brother died. The one who caused it still walks this land. I seek him… not for vengeance, but to end what began that night.”)
 

Backstory:

 

Radahn was once a knight sworn to the forgotten kingdom of Stormvale. He lived to protect its people and guard the mountain passes from raiders and beasts. But one stormy night, the skies turned red — an army of shadowed riders attacked, led by a figure wearing a rune-etched amulet. The flames devoured his homeland; his brother fell that night, and Stormvale was lost to ashes.

Since that day, Radahn has wandered the realm alone, his heart bound by guilt and vengeance. The crimson scarf he wears belonged to his fallen brother, and the faint red glow in his armor is said to be a curse left by the fire that consumed Stormvale. He now seeks the one who caused its fall — not only for revenge, but to finally find peace in the ruins of his past.

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Hello there! Your Application has been set to pending, Please make the following changes and we will happily take another look. You're almost there!:

-> We don't allow Magic, or Invented Locations in character's backstories. Please remove any named locations that aren't a part of the server's lore, and please remove any magical occurences. Most of your backstory is fine, please just tweak it as above.

-> Please provide a version of your skin without a helmet- we like to see you have a skin with a face, if you only provide a masked variant.

Please feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/msg Kingcaouette6666) or over discord @therighthonlortime if you have any questions or would like any clarifications!

You have 48 hours to make the requested changes, or unfortunately your application will be automatically denied. You can always reapply if this happens!


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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

- Failed to make requested edits within 48 hours.

 

My discord is @therighhonlortime if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub


 

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