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akhyls

By akhyls

    • Rules: No
    Referral: PC Gamer
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using outside knowledge to have an unfair atvantage
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: supernatural actions
    Status: Denied

born in a small hut outside of Renelia, Akillis was outcast from birth simply because she had light colored hair. her only friends were the frogs she found along the wall. parents were exiled from Renelia for tax evasion. Both of her parents mistreated her and abused her from a young age. Nonetheless, she kept her head up waiting for the day she could move into the city away from them. As she grew older she became well-known along the wall for cooking for the guards and lifting spirits in the long winter months. she found a confident in a young soldier named Max. they grew very close until the day he was deployed and never came back. she lost trust in the ability of the general after that and vowed to one day take his place. once she moved into the city, she became happier, and made friends with those who didn't care about her hair color. 

(the wiki page wasnt working im very sorry about it)

Character Name: Akillis
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: deep mahogany skin, platinum blonde hair, green eyes, about 5"6", very petite build, wears a simple leather tunic and pants
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Akillis looked up at the very nice looking gentleman. she hesitated before telling him,’”i heard that the booze here is great and the food stall are the best on this coast.” he looked her up and down for a minute then asked,” arent you a little young to be drinking?” Akillis then proceeded to kick him in the shin. 

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Hey! As you can see we’ve unfortunately had to deny your application, see below for detailed reasons as to why:

 

  • You have not read the rules, please be sure to read all of our rules here before re-applying.

  • Your meta and power-gaming definitions are on the right track however they aren’t entirely correct, please be sure to read our definitions page here before re-applying.

  • Dark elves would not be kicked out of Renelia for having light hair, as many have white hair, please keep this in mind when re-applying.

  • For your character biography we require at least two (2) lore references, pleas be sure to include this when re-applying, if you’re unsure of where to find lore to reference please visit our wiki page here.

  • In your character description you describe your character as having platinum blonde hair, however on your skin it is not platinum blonde, please be sure that your skin matches your description.

  • In your character description your describe your character as having mahogany skin, dark elves do not have mahogany skin, please be sure to fix this and be sure that your skin reflects it, if you’re unsure of what a dark elf looks like please refer to their wiki page here.

  • In your character description you describe your character as 5’6”, however the shortest they can be is 5’10”, please be sure that your application reflects server lore when re-applying, if you’re unsure of dark elf lore and appearance, please refer to their wiki page. (linked above.)

  • In your personality traits we require that you have at least one (1) major negative quirk, please be sure to include this when re-applying.

  • Your skin is not up to server standards, please be sure to fix this when re-applying.

 

Don’t worry! You’re free to apply immediately, just please do remember to edit and change all things listed above and you’re then free to re-submit your application!


 

If you’re needing help please feel free to message me here on the forums, or contact me over discord (stickyhon#5642). If you see me in game you’re also free to send me a messaging by typing /msg stickyhon, if you are unable to do so please join our official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

If you’re having issues, please do also take a look over our new player guide here.

 

You may also use /creq in game to contact myself or a fellow CT member for assistance.

It’s also recommended that you read our wiki, which you can find here.

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