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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Use of out of context knowledge in LoTC that your character had not gained yet
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Telling another player what happens to them
    Status: Denied

Zander, a Kaedrin highlander, was abandoned as a small child in the mountains not far from the ruins of Gaekrin, the once great Kaedrin empire. He quickly learned to adapt to the cold climate and soon became an experienced huntsman and gatherer.  Preferring to hike long distances and camp for a couple nights to rest, Zander likes to keep on the move and mobile. His goal is to adventure throughout all the lands of Atlas and see all the wonders it has in store as well as be the first to travel across the massive ice wall along the southern border. As an experienced archer and gatherer he makes money by employing his services to people he comes across. Though he is a novice mage, he has some experience in sword fighting but does not like to use it against others for greed or power. A man of goodwill, he helps anyone he can but does not like to travel in large groups. He would much rather prefer one to two close friends accompanying him in his travels. 


Character Name: Zander Phandelver
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: A lone wanderer hailing from the Southern Mountains and snow.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been:

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For the following reasons:

While none of these reasons would typically warrant a deny, you are unable to edit the application by virtue of the fact that you are on a Guest account, so I must deny it. In future applications, I strongly suggest creating a forum account, as you will need it throughout your time on LoTC as well.

 

Your powergaming definition is a little bit off, please feel free to reference the page on 'power emoting' you can find on our wiki, consider expanding on it with an example, as well as refining the definition itself

You mention him being a 'novice' mage, and while you might mean he has no experience with magic, it would be best to just remove that bit entirely from the biography, as it is ambiguous and you are not allowed to apply with any magic knowledge.

 

 

Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in 6 hours.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command.

 

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