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Vowlzy

By Vowlzy

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: Vowlz
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Just go with the flow, or if someone does it too me just flow with it or ask a higher up to help the situation to learn!
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It ruins it because others will act on this information, even if they dont want to sometimes.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Gerda
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: A big human, strong, big arms and legs, chest and back also big, height is 5, 9. Brown flat hair, brown eyes, a suit as he shows seriousness.
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example: "Well, uhm," *sweating a little bit.* "Well ma'am. It began about 17 years ago... I was 10 at the time. My mother and father were slain by elves. From that day on I hated elves, and ive been training my swordsman ship ever since then."

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please take a look at our wiki for definitions to Metagaming and Powergaming, your answer is too short to show understanding: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

-  Lack of storytelling. Please include a snippet of your character's backstory even if they don't really talk about it to demonstrate your skills. You can speak of things like his family, what his childhood was like, what happened to lead up to this point, etc. 

 

- Your roleplay scenario needs to be at least 6 sentences, including both character dialogues and actions written in 3rd person point of view.

Example: John grimaced at the dirty pillow cushion but still he took a seat. "Hello ma'am..."

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @KaptainScarlet!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 

- Please take a look at our wiki for definitions to Metagaming and Powergaming, your answer is too short to show understanding: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

-  Lack of storytelling. Please include a snippet of your character's backstory even if they don't really talk about it to demonstrate your skills. You can speak of things like his family, what his childhood was like, what happened to lead up to this point, etc. 

 

- Your roleplay scenario needs to be at least 6 sentences, including both character dialogues and actions written in 3rd person point of view.

Example: John grimaced at the dirty pillow cushion but still he took a seat. "Hello ma'am..."

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @KaptainScarlet. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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